Brainstorm
People - Oliver - Richard
Where Panmure rugby pitch
One day My cousin and I went on a bike ride down to the playground. It took a little while for me because I didn't have any gears but my cousin did. Once we got there I was all hot and sticky because of having my helmet on, and the sweltering heat didn't help much either.
When we got there me and Richard looked at each other and then we gunned it down to the swings ( our favourite part of a playground ). It was so much fun, I love the momentum of swings and also the soft cool air rushing past your face.
We then made it back to our bikes and decided to go all the way around the rugby pitch but by the time we got half way we were both panting and exhausted so we stopped at a water fountain to get a drink and then decided to go back home. On the way back a bird poop landed on my hand. I was horrified and Richard and I had a good laugh before our bike ride ended.
Walht: Use the structure of a recount to write about a personal experience
I am a Year 6 student at Saint Patrick’s School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Mrs Dines.
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Friday, 16 February 2018
Friday, 28 November 2014
Do you know my best friend?
WALT write about my best friend.
I know this when I write about my best friend named Richard.
Monday, 4 August 2014
How to Train Your Dragon 2
How to Train Your Dragon 2
In
the holidays I went to the movies with Te Riana, Augustine and Harley. They are my friends. Te Riana’s Nana and Harley’s Dad, Joseph,
took us to the movies. We went to the
movie theatre at Sylvia Park.
The
movie was about dragons fighting other dragons and humans. At the beginning of the movie the dragons
practised racing. They called it racing
but it was more like soccer. They didn’t
play with a ball. Instead they played
with a sheep. They had to fly over the
goal and drop the sheep into the goal.
The
main characters in the movie are Hiccup and Toothless. Hiccup is a boy and Toothless is a dragon. In
the middle of the story Hiccup finds his mum.
The
end of the story was sad. The good ice
dragon died and then the bad ice dragon told all of the other dragons to be
bad. The dragons were kind of blind and
so they couldn’t see each other. Toothless
fought Hiccup. Toothless tried to breath
fire onto Hiccup but Hiccup’s dad pushed Hiccup away. Then Hiccup’s dad died from Toothless’ fire
breathe. But Hiccup was ok. Hiccup’s Dad was the chief and so when he
died Hiccup became the new chief.
After
the movies we went to McDonald’s for lunch.
I had a fun day at the movies with my friends.
By
Oliver
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