L.I. W.A.L.T - write a recount correct punctuation.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write a recount about the Duffy show using correct punctuation.
Cool!!!! I watched a Duffy show. First we sat down in lines then the show started.
Duffy was asleep and a radio woke him up. Then he went to the neighbours and saw an old lady, named Ruby listening to the radio. After that they became good friends and Duffy visited her every day.
Duffy eventually realised she couldn't read,
because her father died in a war and she couldn't raise enough money to go to school. So, Duffy built a time machine and saved Ruby's dad from an explosion . Then he went to the future and saw himself as an adult. When he came back home, Ruby's father was alive.
Ruby gave Duffy her favourite book for saving her dad from death.Ruby learned how to read because, her father made enough money for Ruby to go to school.
I am a Year 6 student at Saint Patrick’s School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Mrs Dines.
Monday, 22 August 2016
Tuesday, 9 August 2016
Quality Blog Posts
Learning intention: we are learning to create a quality blog post.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I when I write 6 things I can use for a quality blog post.
Labels:
blog post,
Cyber smart,
quality
Thursday, 4 August 2016
How do cats show their feelings?
Cats have many different ways of showing their feelings.
1. When cats are angry they hiss to make things go away. They will scratch you with their sharp claws. Their hair stands on end and their tail switches. They will spit at you too!
2. When cats are happy they purr especially when you tickle them. They also smooch you and roll over to get their tummy tickled.
Cats are great pets ( dogs are better ) but they can be scary at times.
Cats have many different ways of showing their feelings.
1. When cats are angry they hiss to make things go away. They will scratch you with their sharp claws. Their hair stands on end and their tail switches. They will spit at you too!
2. When cats are happy they purr especially when you tickle them. They also smooch you and roll over to get their tummy tickled.
Cats are great pets ( dogs are better ) but they can be scary at times.
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