Monday, 22 August 2016

Duffy Theatre

L.I. W.A.L.T - write a recount correct punctuation.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when  I write a recount about the Duffy show  using correct punctuation.

Cool!!!! I watched a Duffy show.                                    First we sat down in lines  then the show started.
Duffy was asleep and a radio woke him up.   Then he went to the neighbours and saw an old lady, named Ruby listening to the radio. After that they became good friends and Duffy visited her every day.   
Duffy eventually realised she couldn't read,
because her father died in a war  and she couldn't   raise enough money to go to school. So, Duffy built a time machine and saved Ruby's dad from an explosion . Then he went to the future and saw himself as an  adult. When he came back home, Ruby's father was alive. 

Ruby gave Duffy her favourite book for saving her dad from  death.Ruby learned how to read because, her father made enough money for Ruby to go to school.


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